
Doomsday
Scene One. INT. Sarah Jane’s Attic
Sarah Jane walks in with Luke and Maria behind her.
SARAH JANE
Mr Smith we need you.
Mr Smith’s theme tune starts to play as he starts to appear out the wall.
MR. SMITH
Good afternoon Sarah Jane
SARAH JANE
Mr Smith something weird is happening in London, do you know anything?
MR. SMITH
I am picking up signs of the void Sarah Jane
MARIA
And what is the void?
LUKE
The void is the space between universes
MARIA
There is another universe
SARAH JANE
Maria there are many universes all around us, now can you tell me where about you’re picking this void signal up Mr Smith?
MR. SMITH
In a place called Truman church Sarah Jane
MARIA
The gorgon?
SARAH JANE
I don’t think it’s the gorgon Maria
MARIA
Then what then?
SARAH JANE
Well then why don’t we find that out!
LUKE
What about Clyde?
SARAH JANE
We will go Luke give him a call tell him where we are going, then we will get going
Scene Two. EXT. Outside Truman Church
Maria looks up as the church bells start to ring.
SARAH JANE
Right then let’s go in
LUKE
Something is happening inside
MARIA
Why do you say that Luke?
LUKE
The hair is standing up on the back of my neck!
SARAH JANE
Well we’d better see what’s happening in there
Scene three. INT. Inside Truman Church
MINISTER GORDON
My lord I will praise you always
The doors swing open and Sarah Jane, Luke and Maria walk in looking around.
MINISTER GORDON
Yes my children what are your sins?
SARAH JANE
Hello, I’m Sarah Jane and this is my son Luke and his friend Maria and who are you, the minister here I presume?
MINISTER GORDON
I am Minister Gordon and what do you want God to help you with?
SARAH JANE
Yes sorry, I was wondering if I could have an interview with you for the time magazine.
MINISTER GORDON
I am a bit busy my child, people to see
SARAH JANE
sorry we will just get out your way then
MINISTER GORDON
Thank you my child
Sarah Jane turns away. Maria and Luke follow her out the open doors.
Scene Four. EXT. Outside Truman Church
Sarah Jane and the other two walk down the stairs and stand at the bottom.
MARIA
So how do we break in then?
SARAH JANE
We don’t!
LUKE
Mum there is some thing wrong here, I can fell it
SARAH JANE
Yes I know but we need more information
MARIA
So you think something alien is going on?
SARAH JANE
I don’t know but we need to get home and find out more about this place
Scene Five. INT. Inside Truman Church
Minister Gordon is on one knee looking up at a giant window.
MINISTER GORDON
I will incinerate this world my lord
VOICE
You better not fail us
MINISTER GORDON
I will not my lord
Minister Gordon’s suit starts to fade and out from his back wings shoot into the air. His hair starts to grow long and his claws starts to grow very long. There where Minister Gordon was knell’s a black half bat half human monster.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
My people will rise once more and soon we will be masters of earth
Scene Six. INT. Sarah Jane’s attic
Sarah Jane, Luke and Maria are all standing around Mr. Smith who is doing a search on Truman Church.
MR. SMITH
The void readings are getting higher Sarah Jane!
SARAH JANE
But what could make it do this Mr Smith?
MR. SMITH
Sarah Jane, I am searching my banks to find out any race that can open the rift
The attic door swings open and Clyde walks in looking sad. Luke and Maria look round to see him just standing their hands in his pockets.
MARIA
How was it?
CLYDE
Ye it was ok
Sarah Jane turns round to look at Clyde just standing there.
SARAH JANE
How’s your family?
CLYDE
Their ok
SARAH JANE
Sorry I couldn’t come
CLYDE
I know, saving the world and all
Luke
Its ok, we will help you get through it
CLYDE
Well maybe it is
MR. SMITH
Sarah Jane I have found a match
Sarah Jane, Luke and Maria turn round to look at Mr Smith. Clyde walks down the stairs and joins them. Sarah Jane puts her arm around him.
SARAH JANE
Mr Smith what is it?
MR. SMITH
Thousand’s of years ago there lay creatures from the snake head galaxy. These creatures could control the void and all the power around it. A few hundred years ago they all just disappeared none survived of what people know. Their planet Hellove blew up years after. Now it look’s like one survived Sarah Jane
SARAH JANE
How do you know it was them Mr Smith we have to be certain?
MR. SMITH
It had signs of raven shots in the signal
SARAH JANE
Well then what is it called?
MR. SMITH
The Race are known as The Helleven Angel’s
CLYDE
So we are fighting a bunch of angels?
MARIA
The name sort of reminds me of Hell and Heaven together and there you go
SARAH JANE
So we need to go and stop them or it from whatever they or it wants to do
LUKE
First we need to find out how many we are dealing with
Scene Seven. EXT. Outside Truman Church
Sarah Jane, Luke, Maria and Clyde all stand out side the church looking up at the doors that are closed.
CLYDE
Why are things always in churches?
MARIA
How is every thing in churches Clyde?
CLYDE
We had the Gorgons and the nuns, the Twills and the choir boys and the Sral how could I forget the Sral.
LUKE
Well they finished well
SARAH JANE
So is this one going to. So let’s go and see what were dealing with
Scene Eight. INT. Inside Truman Church
Sarah Jane, Luke, Maria and Clyde walk in to see Minister Gordon standing staring at the door.
MINISTER GORDON
Nice to see you again
CLYDE
We know what you are you alien freak!
MARIA
CLYDE!
MINISTER GORDON
I don’t know what you mean my child
SARAH JANE
Some one in this church is an alien and we plan to find out who it is
LUKE
A Helleven Angel that is what we are looking for it is a sort of a monster
MINISTER GORDON
HOW DARE YOU CALL ONE OF MY PEOPLE A MONSTER YOU ARE THE MONSTERS!
LUKE
He is the alien
SARAH JANE
We need to see if it is just him
Sarah Jane pulls up her sleeve and their sitting on her rist was a new chunky watch just like Captain Jack’s vortex manipulator.
SARAH JANE
Mr Smith I need you!
Mr. Smiths fan fair starts to play out the watch.
MR. SMITH
Nice to hear from you Sarah Jane
CLYDE
New gadgets very smart
LUKE
Mum and Mr Smith has been working on it for a while now
SARAH JANE
Mr Smith can you trace the rift signal you picked up earlier
MR. SMITH
The only rift signal I can find in right in front of you Sarah Jane
CLYDE
Told you it was him he does seem spooky
MINISTER GORDON
You should pray for all the human beings on this planet
SARAH JANE
Show you’re self right now!
MINISTER GORDON
If I must!
The Human appearance disappeared as the monster from before stood in front of them.
Helleven Angel
My true form that I love unlike your excuse for a body
CLYDE
You don’t look much different from us
Helleven Angel
INSULT!
(PAUSE)
But there is one thing that is different
MARIA
And what is that?
HELLEVEN ANGEL
I can fly
The Helleven Angel threw himself into the air, his wings flapping. His hands started to glow a very dark green as he raised them up towards Sarah Jane. Sarah Jane started to glow the same colour as suddenly she rose into the air and hit the furthest away wall.
LUKE
MUM!!
HELLEVEN ANGEL
Stay there boy
MARIA/CLYDE
SARAH JANE!
SARAH JANE
Mr Smith action 10!
MR. SMITH
Yes Sarah Jane
SARAH JANE
You three save the world
Luke, Maria and Clyde started to glow blue and suddenly disappeared.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
The world will crumble and the human race will fall at my feet
The ground starts to shake as the church walls start to fall. The ground starts to lift up in the air.
Helleven Angel
This world will die and this will soon be Helleven paradise
A hole starts to open up in the sky as green and black colours started to cover the sky. The Helleven Angel looked into the sky and started to laugh.
SARAH JANE
You can’t do this
The Helleven angel looked down and started to give Sarah Jane a piercing look.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
You will be my witness as the earth falls
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Lifetime
Scene One. INT. Sarah Jane’s Attic
The Same bright light appeared again and Luke, Maria and Clyde fell to the floor.
CLYDE
My head
MARIA
What happened, what was that?
LUKE
It was a teleport, a strong one to get all three of us here
All three of them stumbled to their feet, grabbing their heads.
MARIA
Sarah Jane
CLYDE
She saved us
LUKE
And we are going to save her
CLYDE
How do you think we can stop a giant angel from hell?
LUKE
With him
All three of them turned and faced to face the wall where Mr. Smith is.
LUKE
Mr Smith we need you!
Mr. Smith’s fan fair started to fill the room as he appeared from out the wall.
MARIA
Mr Smith what’s happening?
Mr Smith
The helleven angel has opened the void
CLYDE
So what does that mean?
Mr Smith
The helleven angel has opened the void. It is now devouring the earth at a fast rate and when it reaches London again the helleven race will soon be lose.
LUKE
So how do we stop it?
MR. SMITH
Playing track three
SARAH JANE
If you three are hearing this message the earth is in danger. What ever we are up against has me and is about to destroy earth or kill every little thing on this planet
CLYDE
She must be able to read into the future
SARAH JANE
I know Clyde would have said something by now so I am going to get on. So we can’t stop this thing so we need to call in help and fast. I have given Mr Smith directions for the only people who can help save earth. First is UNIT, which means you need to get Martha Jones. Next up is Torchwood that is based in Cardiff and head of that is Captain Jack Harkness former companion to the Doctor. And finally if this thing can destroy the world we need the one man that can stop it. THE DOCTOR. Upon all else we need to find the Doctor or all might be lost. I trust all of you to do this for me and the world
MR. SMITH
That is the end of the tape
CLYDE
So when are we heading out
MR. SMITH
Sarah Jane has set you out the tasks
MARIA
So we split up then
MR. SMITH
Maria you first
A piece of paper slid out from Mr. Smith. Maria picked it up and slid it into her pocket.
MR. SMITH
Maria you will be heading to UNIT London
MARIA
Ok that’s fine with me
LUKE
Good luck Maria
MARIA
Thanks Luke
Maria runs up and gives Luke a hug.
MARIA
I better go and say goodbye to my dad
CLYDE
Good luck Maria
Maria: You two stay safe, I want to see you all back in one piece
Maria runs up the stairs and out the attic door.
MR. SMITH
Next is Clyde who will be looking for Torchwood
CLYDE
How will I get to Cardiff?
MR. SMITH
I have wired up Sarah Jane’s car with myself inside to help
CLYDE
You are going to drive?
MR. SMITH
Yes Clyde is that not to your liking?
CLYDE
No but it sounds futuristic
MR. SMITH
The car is ready outside waiting for you to enter
CLYDE
Better get going mate
LUKE
I know you like her
CLYDE
Who?
LUKE
Maria
CLYDE
I don’t
LUKE
I won’t say
CLYDE
You better not
Clyde runs up the stairs and out the attic door just like Maria.
MR. SMITH
Now Luke it’s your turn!
LUKE
Tracking down The Doctor
Mr Smith
Luke he could be anywhere in time and space
LUKE
So how do I find him?
MR. SMITH
I can’t give you a map but I can give you this
A second panel popped out Mr. Smith and lying on it was a small rounded thing.
LUKE
A space capsule fondator
MR. SMITH
You will need to go and find him Luke
LUKE
The universe is a big place Mr. Smith
MR. SMITH
The earth needs you Luke
LUKE
See you then Mr. Smith
Luke picks up the space capsule fondator and presses the large yellow button. A flash of bright white light filled the room and as it
Scene Two. INT/EXT. Ruins of Truman Church
The Helleven Angel is sitting on his large thrown that is made of black crystal.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
Your world will soon fall
The helleven Angel looks over to the back wall where Sarah Jane is chained up.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
A lifetime of nothingness and now my people will rise
SARAH JANE
I have a friend that could stop you
HELLEVEN ANGEL
The Doctor is his name
SARAH JANE
How do you know him?
Helleven Angel I covered your mind and he came up the first time you arrived. I then sent him on a wild goose chase all the way to the end of the universe
SARAH JANE
We will stop you
HELLEVEN ANGEL
That’s right you children and that computer
SARAH JANE
You leave them alone
HELLEVEN ANGEL
I might go and give them a little visit
The Helleven angel stands up and spreads his wings. He pushes himself off the ground and flies off.
SARAH JANE
YOU LEAVE THEM ALONE; YOU LEAVE ALL OF THEM ALONE!
Scene three. INT. Jackson House
The Front door swings open and Maria walks in.
MARIA
Dad are you there?
Alan comes running down the stairs.
ALAN
Maria where have you been?
MARIA
Dad I have to leave soon
ALAN
Your mum has been going crazy
MARIA
Dad I need to go and help save the world
ALAN
Where is Sarah Jane?
MARIA
I need to save her too
ALAN
And the boys?
MARIA
They have their own tasks all set by Sarah Jane
ALAN
You could die Maria, look at the sky
MARIA
That hasn’t stopped me before
Maria runs out the door, Alan runs to the door.
ALAN
MARIA!!!
Scene Five. INT. Sarah Jane’s attic
Sarah Jane’s roof blows up sending flames, smoke and rubble everywhere. The Helleven Angel lowers itself down to face Mr. Smith
HELLEVEN ANGEL
You must be the super computer that hopes to save the world
MR. SMITH
Get out this house
HELLEVEN ANGEL
That is not a nice thing to say to a guest
MR. SMITH
You shall leave
Mr. Smiths gun raises from his large keyboard. He shoots a small beam at the Helleven Angel but doesn’t do anything.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
For that you shall die
The Helleven angel lifts both hands up at Mr. Smith. They started to glow the same green colour as before. Mr. Smith started to blow up with sparks and flames appearing from all over. Mr. Smith started to give a pain full scream as he shut down.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
Die you piece of metal
Scene six. INT. Sarah Jane’s car
Clyde is sitting in the driver’s seat while Mr. Smith is driving. To the side of him is a small alien sat nav.
CLYDE
How long will it take?
MR. SMITH
Clyde it will take another 2.20 hours
CLYDE
The world could have ended by then
Mr Smith
I estimate that the world will come to an end unless we stop it in 5 hours
CLYDE
Well that is good to know, so getting on a new topic where is this Torchwood based in Cardiff?
MR. SMITH
Torchwood is based directly under Cardiff bay
CLYDE
One place I have never been too, Cardiff
Mr. Smith started to give a spine chilling scream.
CLYDE
MR. SMITH?
Scene Seven. EXT. Long country road.
The car loses all control on the road and flies over the drop at the side of the road. As it falls it twist twice and then hits the ground with a large crash.
Scene Eight. INT. UNIT London
Maria walks into UNIT London. No one is around it is deserted.
MARIA
Well this is where I’m suppose to be
(PAUSE)
It looks like they left in a rush
Scene Nine. EXT. Field
Clyde starts to pull himself from Sarah Jane’s burning car.
CLYDE
HELP!!!!
Clyde stumbles to his feet grabbing his right arm. He looks around to see nothing for miles.
CLYDE
How am I to get to Cardiff now?
Clyde hears a voice coming from the burning car.
CLYDE
MR.SMITH!
Clyde runs over to the car and lies down on his stomach. He pulls himself in to hear the faint voice.
MR. SMITH
Clydeeeeeeee ruuuuun it, it, it, it, it is coming for you!!!
CLYDE
It’s coming for me?
MR. SMITH
The Helleven Angel
Clyde pulls himself out the car and stands up. He backs away just in time as the car explodes into flames. Clyde steps back to see a giant fire burning in front of him.
CLYDE
Sarah Jane’s going to be mad
Clyde turns and walks away towards the main road. He climbs up the small hill to see miles of road. He lifts his head to see The Helleven Angel hover above him.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
Hello Clyde
Clyde lowers his head and starts to run forwards.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
I love a good old fashioned hunt
He starts to fly after Clyde keeping close to him.
CLYDE
This isn’t good
HELLEVEN ANGEL
Clyde you won’t get away
CLYDE
You want a bet mate
Clyde jumps forward down the small hill until he reaches the bottom. He picks himself up and looks up to see just a clear sky. He pulls his head back down to see The Helleven Angel standing in front of him.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
I got you, mate
Scene Nine. INT. UNIT London
Maria walks about still seeing no one. A man suddenly jumps up from behind a desk looking scared.
UNT SOLDIER
Please help me
MARIA
What happened?
UNIT SOLDIER
The angel of death came
MARIA
He was here
UNIT SOLDIER
The grim reaper
The UNIT soldier suddenly turns white at the sight of the helleven angel. The UNIT soldier steppes back as The Helleven Angel fly’s away with Maria in his hands.
Scene Ten. INT. Church Ruins
Sarah Jane is chained up to the wall with Clyde in a force field and Luke on the ground unconscious. The Helleven Angel fly’s in and throws Maria beside Luke.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
The team all together
SARAH JANE
Leave them alone
CLYDE
We will stop you
MARIA
All together
HELLEVEN ANGEL
One out cold on the ground, another in a force field, one little defenceless girl and one chained to the wall how are you going to stop me
SARAH JANE
Stop this now
HELLEVEN ANGEL
You think I will stop. After thousands years of planning and knowing when to do it, I will stop
MARIA
But the human race is dying out there
HELLEVEN ANGEL
I don’t care about humans, about the earth
CLYDE
You’re a monster
HELLEVEN ANGEL
Well thank you
Luke starts to wake up.
LUKE
What happened?
SARAH JANE
Luke are you ok?
LUKE
I’m fine
MARIA
Thank god for that
CLYDE
You ok mate
LUKE
I’m fine
HELLEVEN ANGEL
Thank you all for having a nice chat
LUKE
Thank you
HELLEVEN ANGEL
For what?
LUKE
For this
Luke stands up and pulls out a small laser gun out his back pocket.
HELLEVEN ANGEL
Where did you get that you little rat?
LUKE
You have caused enough trouble
Luke shoots at the Helleven Angel. It starts to flip in the air. It hits the rift and it starts to electrify the Helleven Angel. Sarah Jane’s chains disappear. The sky turns back to blue and the giant mountain starts to drop back to the ground.
MARIA
Luke you did it
SARAH JANE
Luke where did you get that?
Scene Eleven. EXT. Farm
Luke just suddenly appears. A man watches in amazement.
MAN
WHAT?
LUKE
I’m looking for the doctor
MAN
The lonely Angel
LUKE
Yes him
MAN
Why are you looking for him?
LUKE
Earth is in trouble
MAN
I think I have the answer
The man runs back inside and soon runs back out.
MAN
Here you go
LUKE
What is it?
MAN
A proton magnetic gun
Luke grabs the gun.
LUKE
Thanks
A blue light appears and Luke was gone.
Scene Twelve. INT. Church
CLYDE
Way to go mate
SARAH JANE
You know what I say about guns
LUKE
It was the only way
Suddenly the Helleven Angel jumps up and runs towards them.
MARIA
Luke behind you
HELLEVEN ANGEL
You will die boy
Sarah Jane grabs the gun off Luke and shoots. The Helleven Angel fly’s back into the hole where the rift is. There is a tiny pop and the hole disappears.
CLYDE
Sarah Jane
SARAH JANE
It was for the earth
Scene Twelve. INT. Sarah Jane’s attic
4 months later
The whole group is all standing around the newly fixed Mr Smith.
MR. SMITH
Thank you Sarah Jane
MARIA
What if it returns?
SARAH JANE
I don’t think it will be doing that soon
CLYDE
We finished him off
LUKE
Just to be on the safe side, we have the gun in a safe place
CLYDE
We beat anything that comes our way
MARIA
Defenders of earth
SARAH JANE
More will come our way and we need to be ready
MARIA
Because it’s big out there
CLYDE
Full of aliens and creatures
LUKE
Good and bad
SARAH JANE
And we will fight what ever comes our way

Entry 6
Wow, this was so action-packed I could hardly catch my breath! And the Helleven Angel is very scary. Great to see the team all join together at the end.
I love the wristwatch version of Mr Smith! Can't believe the writers on the show haven't ever thought of this. Oh, and anything with religious undertones gets a tick in my book. I'd have liked to have seen more action and less dialogue, mind. Remember, television is also a VISUAL medium - so show the audience what you want them to see/know, as often as you can.
The script has a very epic movie-like quality to it, and I love that it's in two parts - much as the episodes would be. Also love that the gang have to split up to save the world, but I'm not entirely certain Sarah Jane would approve of Luke using a weapon.